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You forgot how you got there, but you're there, and that's all that matters.

In a girl's house, to be exact. The girl there is kind of pretty with her blond hair and all, but she says nothing. She hardly even moves.
She just stands there unaffected as you walk around her house, touchin' all of her stuff, reading her books...You just want to see if something bothers her.

Ah, a light switch. Perfect.
You walk over to the light switch and start clicking it on and off. On...off...on...off...You remember how angry your mom would get when you did this, and laugh a bit.
On..off...on...off...
It's been a while since you first walked over there, and now you can't stop. On...off...You don't even think about pulling yourself away, even though you've been there longer than what would be considered "Normal".

And then it happens.
First, you hear a scream behind you. It's the girl, her face contorting and slowly turning monochrome. Her scream turns into something inhuman-sounding. You can only stand there and watch as the pretty blond girl slowly turned into a monster.
A horrible-looking, amorphous monochrome beast, smiling at you as if it were laughing. Shocked by this transformation, you attempt to turn the lights back on to reverse the whole thing, but it doesn't work.

You try frantically to make the monster go away. You grab a few books from the bookshelf and throw them at it. It has no reaction.
I have no other choice, you think, pulling your trusty knife out of your pocket. This thing's helped you so many times...nothing like this, but bad situations nonetheless.
You hesitatingly walk towards the monster, brandishing your knife. You're less than an inch away, and its face changes. Now it doesn't even look like a face, just a bunch of black flecks in a large, white space.

And then you see a bright light.

The monster is still there, its face torn up, but now you're not in a recognizable place. The sky is pitch-black, you're knee-deep in some unidentified liquid, and there are things resembling volcanoes far off in the distance.
On those volcanoes stand large creatures that look like they're simultaneously crying and vomiting blood. You walk for what seems like miles, never going anywhere, in an endless loop.

And then you wake up.

You're lying there in your bed, drenched in cold sweat. Sleep paralysys still has a hold on your body. You can't even scream.

That creature haunts your life now. You swear you can see it in the closet, or under the stairs. Sitting. Waiting to take you to that horrible place again.
I've been reading creepypasta [link] stories all day, and I decided to write one about UBOAAAA. :3

My mom was highly impressed with this, which makes me feel awesome. I just hope it's scary enough for the rest of the internet~
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JaceTheKiller Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kiss
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babychilliam Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello, I am troll who is pretending to be a young child who is dead, and
I wish to waste you time with this chain mail. So you can't stop
reading, even though you are capable of looking away or closing the tab.
Anyway,
I am a young child who was killed so somehow I have managed to get
wi-fi internet connection when I'm in a coffin. I was brutally murdered,
yet nobody wiped all the blood off of my face, which is just plain
lazy. If you don't post this 1000 times in 10 seconds I will kill you,
which is just plain over reacting since nothing is going to happen to me
if you don't post it. So you have been warned, I will kill you if you
don't post it, despite the fact that I don't know where you live and I'm
also dead, therefore unable to move or get out of my coffin. If you do
post it, then you are retarded. Congratulations.

MUHAHAHAHA

PS: :iconshutthefuckupplz:
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tochiro-999 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I liked it much,Clap Heart Heart 
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iFantasi Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Oh gosh, an Uboa creepypasta. It's fantastic.
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MotherDeathy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uboaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~
As a great Youtuber once said "He just wants a friend..Who..can never leave" "And she's also a very young girl...Who can never leave" "He wants to take you on a date...and you can..never leave.." "Yeah this guys a creeper"
explination of uboa ^
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:iconthesilverneko:
thesilverneko Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Artist
do you mean PBG? :D
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:iconmotherdeathy:
MotherDeathy Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aha!you got it :D in return for your smartness I give you llama!~
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:iconthesilverneko:
thesilverneko Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Artist
thats the first time anyone called me smart :D
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:iconmotherdeathy:
MotherDeathy Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahaaaa ^^ nyeh really?
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:iconthesilverneko:
thesilverneko Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Artist
yep :P
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:iconmotherdeathy:
MotherDeathy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ehe ^u^
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RuisuRuisuDance Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mkay, first of all, this isn't a creepypasta, this is only the explication of the Uboa event, I don't know why people call this "creepypasta".
Also is not scary, it has no blood, no gore, no feeling, no loneliness, no nothing, it isn't even creepy (well just a little but this event is real on the game)...
Creepypastas are a term for a alternated or cursed game, like if Monoe cuts all the hands of Monoko and puts it into her other two, THAT would be a good creepypasta. This doesn't deserves to be a creepypasta, by just explaining the Uboa event we are not going to another point...
So, gotcha?
Sorry but this is a little...disgusting, in my opinion, anyways you tried it, what makes the creepypasta a little better... I recommend you to read my Yume 2kki creepypasta, maybe, maybe you can get some imagination of this, is a little short and it's nothing of the other world, but... Better read it.
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ri1s3n Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
Good job!!

This was fun to read...
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jojogape Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL, I don't like creepypasta, but this one is awesome.
They say Yume Nikki is TOO scary, I've thought about playing it, but... I need to know... is it really SO creepy? All the time? Aren't there... like... Level 1-ish sunny places?
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GakupoGuy Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
naw man, its all fun, to be honest its just eerie. The emptiness. The music, so simple and quiet. The author of the game just made it messed up and empty. There are a lot of "Level up!" moments and "Level one" style maps. If you could handle this, you can handle Yume Nikki
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jojogape Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, but that comment was long ago and I already played Yume Nikki entirely and a lot of its fangames, I'm even making a fangame myself xD
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Lol, thanks. c:

Hmm...it's not like constant-in-your-face sort of scary, but if big, empty spaces and atmospheric horror is your uh kryptonite I'd stay away. ;; There are a few jump scares, but they're so well-known now they're only surprising if it's your first time IMO.
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jojogape Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'll stay away. ;_;
I hate empty spaces... because I don't know if SOMETHINGWILLAPPEARSUDDENLYANDSCAREYOU4EVEROMGOMGOMGOMG

<spoiler>

Actually, I've searched so much information that I know Uboa, Monoe, Monoko, the aztec monkey thing, the Takofuusen, FACE, Masada, Poniko...

</spoiler>

I think it's enough even to make a fanfic xD But no, after that comment I searched more info and decided not to play. I'll stay in my platformer- forever-and-ever opinion.
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Ahaha...well, I'm glad to provide some advice at any rate. If your curiosity gets the better of you without wanting to play it, LoudMan01 on Youtube has a particularly amusing (if somewhat outdated) Let's Play of it. :>
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jojogape Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay ^^
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oORubyTreasureOo Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now I REALLY want to play this game. I mean, who DOESN'T want to play a game where the title has their name in it?
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heart4element Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
UBOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

uboa: :iconuboanotimpressedplz:
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:iconmimikichu:
Mimikichu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
:icondatuboaplz:
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Triple-palm Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
:iconcielinguboaplz:
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:iconmimikichu:
Mimikichu Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
:iconyaranaikauboa:
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Triple-palm Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
:iconmonochromeuboaplz:
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Mimikichu Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
:iconuboalaplz:
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Triple-palm Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
:iconexciteduboaplz:
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Wafflepunk Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
:iconrainboaplz:
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Triple-palm Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
:iconuboanotimpressedplz:
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ZackFaire13 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
I love how you mixed the real Uboa event in!
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pirthecatsir Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
Ah, but in this story you don't even have to leave the room to turn the light back off. So it's much easier.
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
Lol, true. ;; I didn't know how to fit in the walking out of the house and not make it really awkward.
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CloudsEnd Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Uboa is no monster. He is my best friend.
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Emogaz Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010
these stories are all too entertaining but o wonder i have cronic insomnia...
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ittehbittehtiger Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
DUN KEEL TEH UBOA!

nice pasta!
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Dimentio Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Say, would you like to get your pasta featured on the site? I could easily touch it up a little and send it to the webmaster. You'd be credited, of course.
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
Th-That would be an honor! :'D
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Blackmoon1231 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
I hear a Uboa! ~sniped~ ~fav~
You're better than I am at writing, thats for sure....
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
Why thank you~ :'D People seem to like this story...maybe it's the power of UBOAAAA~
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Blackmoon1231 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
That seems to be one of the facts.
Another is that i really love Poniko and Uboa. I made my roleplay character even look like her.
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
Poniko is aweosme indeed. =w= My favorite character is Masada, but Poniko and Uboa are cool. :D
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:iconblackmoon1231:
Blackmoon1231 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
You mean the piano dude? I can't draw him for anything, Even a hug from poniko! ~pwn'd by uboa~
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2009
Mmyes, I mean Piano-san. C: It took me forever to draw him right. XD
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ArtisticMae Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
EPIC.
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:iconrainbowmonkey9:
rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
WHY THANK YOU. :'D A lot of people have been saying it's good...maybe I has hidden talent?
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ArtisticMae Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
YES.
BUT YOUR TALENT IS UNHIDDEN IN THIS!!
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RJPWB46 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOU AND YOUR SCARY THINGS.

But seeing the word "creepypasta" makes me giggle. XD
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rainbowmonkey9 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008
It's a funny word, yes. XD

I might write more stuff like this 'cause it's fun. C:
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RJPWB46 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OKAY.

But Mardi-dono will not be pleased. >/
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